I Will Write your Advanced Origin Story or Epiphany Bridge Story Script

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Struggling to write your Origin Story or Epiphany Bridge Story?

I understand. As a mentor of mine once said, "It's hard to see the picture when you are in the frame!"

Let me take your information and rework your story

About 2 years ago,

I was sitting in the place you are now…  

Looking at a set of disjointed patched up stories and wondered how I am going to bring them together or worse….

an empty page.

I was wondering how best to take the information that Russell Brunson had shared about Origin Stories and Epiphany Bridge Stories. Then create my own origin story that would be of interest to others.

Then I kicked myself and said “Jerry, you are up to this,  You have written and performed Standup comedy, studied NLP and studied clowning in the mountains around Barcelona.“  Not to mention my 23 years in the Sales industry.

Now I know what you are thinking.  

What does “Clowning in the mountains around Barcelona” have to do with Story Writing, I don’t know, but I just wanted to mention it.

Hi, I’m Jerry J O Brien,

I help people get their REAL Story out to the world.  And not be stuck talking technobabble.

Technobabble is when people talk about something using jargon that only techies understand. A sure sign you are using technobabble is when your prospect clients eyes are rolling to the back of their heads!

I will create an amazing story script for you and your business that will help share your company and personal message to your potential audience in an interesting and captivating way. Your story will be ideal for a website introduction video or for welcome emails to your list.

Let's do this together, purchase the gig below! 

When I started, I didn’t have a blueprint of how to write one of these stories.  Russells questions gave some over all guidelines but didn’t go deep enough and didn't pull it all together.

When I was writing my story my brain kept throwing questions at me.

Will people want to listen to my story?

Why would they want to?

Will I get abuse from people for being so open?

If only there was someone to guide me and tell me if I am going in the right direction.

Today, my Origin Story has been viewed by 1,000s on Youtube, with 100s of likes and 100s of positive comments. 

It is a nice feeling to open up and share. And then for people to resonate with my story.  

After my first story, a friend asked me for some help with theirs.


This got me thinking.

There must be others like me who need help writing their stories.

Can I help them? 

Lets do this together, Let me know if you have any questions. 

Initially, I set out to help some friends and their businesses get their message out.  Then, I went to the internet and offered the service.

“What is your REAL Story? Advanced Origin and Epiphany Bridge Script Writing”.

I took the Origin Story questions and brought them to the next level with my sales, comedy and NLP  experience. Even my clowning might influence stories a little.

Since I started I wrote more than 15 stories for Entrepreneurs with a 5 star rating across multiple platforms. Each one getting better and better.

My stories are being used in California, Canada, Singapore, UK, Ireland and Mexico to name some countries. Topics including Fitness, Counseling, Make Money Online, Network Marketing and Consulting.

Do you want me to help you with your story? Message me and ask any questions you might have.


A Few Tips

Your Back story is so important, it allows your prospective client to relate to you. Join you on your journey, to understand that you are the one to take them to where they want to go.

Explain your story properly,  don't assume that they know some parts.

As the saying goes:-

Step down from the mountain and share where you came from and then share with them the epiphany that you experienced when you started your business. Talk about your feelings a lot. Share what you saw, felt and smells and all your senses. Share your emotions.

You have to get your audience into the same state you were in and that was how you tell your story.

Why is this priced at this?

To be honest, I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guaranteed this price I suggest that you purchase this now?

What You Will Walk Away With:

  1. Your Origin Story or Your Epiphany Bridge Story Script normally between 700 and 1200 words
  2. High Emotion introduction
  3. 2 Suggested Headlines
  4. Suggested next steps

Here's How The ''What Is your  REAL Story Session'' Works:

  1. Once selected, You will be asked a series of questions that will form the bases for your story.
  2. I will then review and come back with some further questions to “ Go Deeper” into certain parts of your story.
  3. This may happen, 2 or 3 times.
  4. Once I have all the information that I require. I will take your information and re structure it
  5. I will create a compelling introduction based on the information that you have provided and add a lot more major.
  6. You then get to review and tell me what you like, don't like and What I can improve.
  7. I will update and we can do this until you are completely satisfied with your story.

Do I need to buy the extra, extra Large over 1000 words? 

I have completed some simple Origin Stories most are  500 to 1000 words and some of you have a lot to say making them over 1000 words. 

If you don't know, the normal gig should be fine,  but if you think you have a lot to say, then buy the large Extra over 1000 words Extra. 

If in the end, your story is less than what you bought, we can come to an arrangement. ( I'll offer you other services or something that works for both of us. 

I think you might be getting the understanding that I am pretty easy going about these things and want to be fair. 

If you still have questions, or can't afford the Extras just message me and we can discuss. 

Why is this priced at this price?

To be honest, I have completed about 20 stories of varying length. Most at the same price, but these stories can be very time-consuming. Some of you have a lot to say and some not so much.  I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guarantee this price I suggest that you purchase this now today.

OK let's get started, 

Purchase the job and 

Let’s do this together.

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about 23 hours ago
Awesome. It is inspiring. I was reading my original story and started to cry. Jerry I salute you! You are surely a story writer and teller. I sounds and feels so real. God bless you Jerry.
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about 6 hours ago

Thank you so much for your kind words! 

It was a pleasure to work on your story. 

All the best on your journey to 1 Million dollars! 
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26 days ago
Jerry helped me better understand the process of the email copy with my story. I would highly recommend him-
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21 days ago
Hi Justin, 

Thank you so much for the kind words! Glad I was able to help, I look forward to working with you again in the further. 

Talk soon.

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3 months ago
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about 2 months ago
Hi Robert, Thank you for the 5 stars. All the best with your business into the future. 
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I help Entrepreneurs win. 23 years experience in Business Development. including Online Marketing, Marketing and Direct Sales & Partnering. I worked with IBM & Microsoft. I have also help 20+ companies grow. helped one client 2.5x their turnover to over 5m. Message me any Questions

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