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Struggling to write your Origin Story or Epiphany Bridge Story?

I understand. As a mentor of mine once said, "It's hard to see the picture when you are in the frame!"

Lets Plan your best story and then I will rework it to make it amazing

About 4 years ago,

I was sitting in the place you are now… 

Looking at a set of disjointed patched up stories and wondered how I am going to bring them together or worse….

an empty page.

I was wondering how best to take the information that Russell Brunson had shared about Origin Stories and Epiphany Bridge Stories. Then create my own origin story that would be of interest to others.



Then I kicked myself and said “Jerry, you are up to this, You have written and performed Stand Up comedy, studied NLP and studied clowning in the mountains around Barcelona.“ Not to mention my 23 years in the Sales industry.

Now I know what you are thinking. 

What does “Clowning in the mountains around Barcelona” have to do with Story Writing, I don’t know, but I just wanted to mention it.

Hi, I’m Jerry J O Brien,

I help people get their REAL Story out to the world. 

I will create an amazing story script for you and your business that will help share your company and personal message to your potential audience in an interesting and captivating way. Your story will be ideal for a website introduction video or for welcome emails to your list.

Let's do this together!

IMPORTANT INFORMATION - Please Read

NORMAL PRICE for just the story is $599 Discounted at the moment but will be increased with every new order!

This job is for a max of 1000 words and will take 14 days to complete

If you think you have a longer story or faster, then best check out the extras towards the bottom of this page.

Having said that following completion of the Story and Job

I will give you the following BONUSES

Bullseye Story Planning Call- Value $200

Template for 5 Emails Welcome SOS Series (Fill the blanks) Value $300

14 Email Formulas that you can use to keep your audience engaged Value $150

5 Hooks from your Story - Valued $100

eBook 12 Steps to write your first Origin Story even if you never wrote a story before - Valued $100

Total Value 1299 - But I am not charging this today

When I started, I didn’t have a blueprint of how to write one of these stories. Russells questions gave some over all guidelines but didn’t go deep enough and didn't pull it all together.

When I was writing my story my brain kept throwing questions at me.

Will people want to listen to my story?

Why would they want to?

Will I get abuse from people for being so open?

If only there was someone to guide me and tell me if I am going in the right direction.

Today, my Origin Story has been viewed by 1,000s on Youtube, with 100s of likes and 100s of positive comments.

It is a nice feeling to open up and share. And then for people to resonate with my story. 

After my first story, a friend asked me for some help with theirs.

Hmmmm,

This got me thinking.

There must be others like me who need help writing their stories.

Can I help them?

Lets do this together, Let me know if you have any questions.

Initially, I set out to help some friends and their businesses get their message out. Then, I went to the internet and offered the service.

“What is your REAL Story? Advanced Origin and Epiphany Bridge Script Writing”.

I took the Origin Story questions and brought them to the next level with my sales, comedy and NLP experience. Even my clowning might influence stories a little.

Since I started I wrote more than 75 stories for Entrepreneurs with a 5 star rating across multiple platforms. Each one getting better and better.

My stories are being used in California, Canada, Singapore, UK, Ireland and Mexico to name some countries. Topics including Fitness, Counseling, Make Money Online, Network Marketing and Consulting.



Do you want me to help you with your story? Message me and ask any questions you might have.

A Few Tips

Your Back story is so important, it allows your prospective client to relate to you. Join you on your journey, to understand that you are the one to take them to where they want to go.

Explain your story properly, don't assume that they know some parts.

As the saying goes:-

Step down from the mountain and share where you came from and then share with them the epiphany that you experienced when you started your business. Talk about your feelings a lot. Share what you saw, felt and smells and all your senses. Share your emotions.

You have to get your audience into the same state you were in and that was how you tell your story.

Why is this priced at this?

To be honest, I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guaranteed this price I suggest that you purchase this now?

What You Will Walk Away With:

1. Your Origin Story or Your Epiphany Bridge Story Script normally between 700 and 1200 words
2. High Emotion introduction
3. 2 Suggested Headlines
4. Suggested next steps

Here's How The ''What Is your REAL Story Session'' Works:

1. Once selected, You will be asked a series of questions that will form the bases for your story.
2. I will then review and come back with some further questions to “ Go Deeper” into certain parts of your story.
3. This may happen, 2 or 3 times.
4. A call to confirm details
5. Once I have all the information that I require. I will take your information and re structure it
6. I will create a compelling introduction based on the information that you have provided and add a lot more major.
7. You then get to review and tell me what you like, don't like and What I can improve.
8. I will update and we can do this until you are completely satisfied with your story.

Do I need to buy the extra, extra Large over 1000 words?

I have completed some simple Origin Stories most are 500 to 1000 words and some of you have a lot to say making them over 1000 words.

If you don't know, the normal gig should be fine, but if you think you have a lot to say, then buy the large Extra over 1000 words Extra. To a Maximum of 1500 words.

I think you might be getting the understanding that I am pretty easy going about these things and want to be fair.

If you still have questions, or can't afford the Extras just message me and we can discuss.

Why is this priced at this price?

To be honest, I have completed about 75 stories of varying length. Most at the same price, but these stories can be very time-consuming. Some of you have a lot to say and some not so much. I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guarantee this price I suggest that you purchase this now today.



OK let's get started,

Purchase the job and

Let’s do this together.

NORMAL PRICE for just the story is $599 Discounted at the moment but will be increased with every new order!

This job is for a max of 1000 words and will take 12 days to complete

If you think you have a longer story or faster, then best check out the extras towards the bottom of this page. 

Having said that following completion of the Story and Job

I will give you the following BONUSES

Bullseye Story Planning Call - Value $200

Template for 5 Emails Welcome SOS Series (Fill the blanks) Value $300

14 Email Formulas that you can use to keep your audience engaged Value $150

5 Hooks from your Story - Valued $100

eBook 12 Steps to write your first Origin Story even if you never wrote a story before - Valued $100

Total Value 1299 - But I am not charging this