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I Will Write your Advanced Origin Story or Epiphany Bridge Story Script + BONUSES

Copywriting/Story
12 days estimated (12 days guaranteed) >
12 days on average
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Struggling to write your Origin Story or Epiphany Bridge Story?


I understand. As a mentor of mine once said, "It's hard to see the picture when you are in the frame!"


Let me take your information and rework your story




About 2 years ago,

I was sitting in the place you are now… 

Looking at a set of disjointed patched up stories and wondered how I am going to bring them together or worse….

an empty page.

I was wondering how best to take the information that Russell Brunson had shared about Origin Stories and Epiphany Bridge Stories. Then create my own origin story that would be of interest to others.

Then I kicked myself and said “Jerry, you are up to this, You have written and performed Standup comedy, studied NLP and studied clowning in the mountains around Barcelona.“ Not to mention my 23 years in the Sales industry.

Now I know what you are thinking. 

What does “Clowning in the mountains around Barcelona” have to do with Story Writing, I don’t know, but I just wanted to mention it.


Hi, I’m Jerry J O Brien,


I help people get their REAL Story out to the world. And not be stuck talking technobabble.


Technobabble is when people talk about something using jargon that only techies understand. A sure sign you are using technobabble is when your prospect clients eyes are rolling to the back of their heads!


I will create an amazing story script for you and your business that will help share your company and personal message to your potential audience in an interesting and captivating way. Your story will be ideal for a website introduction video or for welcome emails to your list.


Let's do this together!


IMPORTANT INFORMATION - Please Read


NORMAL PRICE for just the story is $499 Discounted at the moment but will be increased with every new order!


This job is for a max of 1000 words and will take 12 days to complete


If you think you have a longer story or faster, then best check out the extras towards the bottom of this page.


Having said that following completion of the Story and Job

I will give you the following BONUSES

Which Funnel is Right for you 30 minute Consultancy Call - Value $200

Template for 5 Emails Welcome SOS Series (Fill the blanks) Value $300

14 Email Formulas that you can use to keep your audience engaged Value $150

5 Hooks from your Story - Valued $100

eBook 12 Steps to write your first Origin Story even if you never wrote a story before - Valued $100


Total Value 1299 - But I am not charging this today




When I started, I didn’t have a blueprint of how to write one of these stories. Russells questions gave some over all guidelines but didn’t go deep enough and didn't pull it all together.


When I was writing my story my brain kept throwing questions at me.

Will people want to listen to my story?

Why would they want to?

Will I get abuse from people for being so open?

If only there was someone to guide me and tell me if I am going in the right direction.


Today, my Origin Story has been viewed by 1,000s on Youtube, with 100s of likes and 100s of positive comments.


It is a nice feeling to open up and share. And then for people to resonate with my story. 


After my first story, a friend asked me for some help with theirs.


Hmmmm,


This got me thinking.


There must be others like me who need help writing their stories.


Can I help them?


Lets do this together, Let me know if you have any questions.


NORMAL PRICE for just the story is $299 Discounted at the moment but will be increased with every new order!





Initially, I set out to help some friends and their businesses get their message out. Then, I went to the internet and offered the service.


“What is your REAL Story? Advanced Origin and Epiphany Bridge Script Writing”.


I took the Origin Story questions and brought them to the next level with my sales, comedy and NLP experience. Even my clowning might influence stories a little.


Since I started I wrote more than 15 stories for Entrepreneurs with a 5 star rating across multiple platforms. Each one getting better and better.


My stories are being used in California, Canada, Singapore, UK, Ireland and Mexico to name some countries. Topics including Fitness, Counseling, Make Money Online, Network Marketing and Consulting.

Do you want me to help you with your story? Message me and ask any questions you might have.

 

A Few Tips

Your Back story is so important, it allows your prospective client to relate to you. Join you on your journey, to understand that you are the one to take them to where they want to go.

Explain your story properly, don't assume that they know some parts.

As the saying goes:-

Step down from the mountain and share where you came from and then share with them the epiphany that you experienced when you started your business. Talk about your feelings a lot. Share what you saw, felt and smells and all your senses. Share your emotions.

You have to get your audience into the same state you were in and that was how you tell your story.

Why is this priced at this?

To be honest, I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guaranteed this price I suggest that you purchase this now?

What You Will Walk Away With:

  1. Your Origin Story or Your Epiphany Bridge Story Script normally between 700 and 1200 words
  2. High Emotion introduction
  3. 2 Suggested Headlines
  4. Suggested next steps


Here's How The ''What Is your REAL Story Session'' Works:

  1. Once selected, You will be asked a series of questions that will form the bases for your story.
  2. I will then review and come back with some further questions to “ Go Deeper” into certain parts of your story.
  3. This may happen, 2 or 3 times.
  4. Once I have all the information that I require. I will take your information and re structure it
  5. I will create a compelling introduction based on the information that you have provided and add a lot more major.
  6. You then get to review and tell me what you like, don't like and What I can improve.
  7. I will update and we can do this until you are completely satisfied with your story.


Do I need to buy the extra, extra Large over 1000 words?


I have completed some simple Origin Stories most are 500 to 1000 words and some of you have a lot to say making them over 1000 words.


If you don't know, the normal gig should be fine, but if you think you have a lot to say, then buy the large Extra over 1000 words Extra. To a Maximum of 1500 words.


I think you might be getting the understanding that I am pretty easy going about these things and want to be fair.


If you still have questions, or can't afford the Extras just message me and we can discuss.



Why is this priced at this price?

To be honest, I have completed about 30 stories of varying length. Most at the same price, but these stories can be very time-consuming. Some of you have a lot to say and some not so much. I am considering increasing the price and will do so soon. If you want to guarantee this price I suggest that you purchase this now today.

OK let's get started,

Purchase the job and

Let’s do this together.


NORMAL PRICE for just the story is $299 Discounted at the moment but will be increased with every new order!


This job is for a max of 1000 words and will take 12 days to complete


If you think you have a longer story or faster, then best check out the extras towards the bottom of this page. 


Having said that following completion of the Story and Job

I will give you the following BONUSES

Which Funnel is Right for you 30 minute Consultancy Call - Value $200

Template for 5 Emails Welcome SOS Series (Fill the blanks) Value $300

14 Email Formulas that you can use to keep your audience engaged Value $150

5 Hooks from your Story - Valued $100

eBook 12 Steps to write your first Origin Story even if you never wrote a story before - Valued $100


Total Value 1299 - But I am not charging this

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17 days ago
Due to a busy schedule I was a little slow in providing Jerry the info he needed. He was great at nudging me however and kept it moving forward - awesome followup and much appreciated. And on the content. Wow! Completely surpassed my expectations. Will definitely hire Jerry again.
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28 days ago
Jerry did a fantastic job in putting together my epiphany story. He took my story and added his magic to make it perfectly fit within the frame work of a epiphany story and also added much needed emotion which he captured perfectly. With Jerrys guidance after he reviewed my funnel and recommended a few changes, he grew my opt in from 1% to 14% almost overnight. Will be using jerry again 10/10
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about 1 month ago
Jerry wrote my origin story and did a great job. Was in the middle of a personal home move and even though it took a little longer than I had hoped he come through like a champ. And even went over and above when we were able to talk. Jerry always gave plenty of time on our calls to discuss things and I would recommend him. I am going to give him a 4 star on communication because it seemed it took a while before I really knew what was going on. probable due to Jerry moving. But once we connected we were good. I would recommend. Glenn B.
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about 1 month ago
Thank you, Jerry, for your timely communication, getting our copy to us as soon as you did. Will most certainly recommend and use your service again! Cheers, Rory
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about 1 month ago
Jerry was very easy to work with and he helped me simplify my complicated story. I was so impressed by what he had done that by the time I had finished reading the story I was ready to click buy on my own products. He is also a great communicator and very thorough with his work. I can highly recommend Jerry and will be working with him in the future. Kind Regards Dan Furlong
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about 2 months ago
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2 months ago
Very skilled and great communication!
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jerryjobrien 
2 months ago
Hi Charles,

Thank you for the review! All the best with your project and your early mornings! :-) 

Jerry 
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2 months ago
Jerry takes his work seriously and communicates quickly! He's keen to collaborate and combine your own ideas with his. Go ahead and work with Jerry, you will love it!!
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jerryjobrien 
2 months ago
Hi David,

Thank you for this. I very much appreciate the kind words! All the best with your new endeavours! 

Talk again soon.

Jerry 
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3 months ago
Omg you're amazing writer...it script worth 10X
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jerryjobrien 
3 months ago
Hi Dev,

Thank you for the positive comments. I know you had concerns before you purchased the job. I am so glad you are happy with the results. 

And thank you for the new order! 

Talk then.

Jerry 
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3 months ago
Awesome. It is inspiring. I was reading my original story and started to cry. Jerry I salute you! You are surely a story writer and teller. I sounds and feels so real. God bless you Jerry.
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jerryjobrien 
3 months ago
MFM,

Thank you so much for your kind words! 

It was a pleasure to work on your story. 

All the best on your journey to 1 Million dollars! 
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I help Entrepreneurs win. 23 years experience in Business Development. including Online Marketing, Marketing and Direct Sales & Partnering. I worked with IBM & Microsoft. I have also help 20+ companies grow. helped one client 2.5x their turnover to over 5m. Message me any Questions

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